AxTekk's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[O Fortuna (unmixed)]

Love the reworking of the beat, and the finding of internal rhymes. Just maybe hit it with some more flow, but I guess that'll come with memorising it. Loving the pushing of the rhythm of the poem. Thought about a slo mo effect on "voiding"? Just a thought. Delivery and concept both hot, flow's the only weak point on this for me.

RezzyTip responds:

thats what im sayin, its hard to sound like you arent reading when you are lol. Once i get it down, it'll sound a lot more on point. its hard with all the thou & dost, kinda odd words to be rapping lol

[Yo' Mama]

This is nice, very smooth. So chill. Though maybe use a drum with more 1-2K on the little runs with the hats (0:06-0:08) like a set of toms.

Piano samples were excellent, and matched with effective synth lines. Very nice.

Poniiboi responds:

Thanks and thanks! If I do something with this beat I'll definitely take your EQ changes. Preciate you listening that hard to see that!

[CLAB - Blest vs Byron]

How I heard this battle.

Blest's:
Filler. Lot's of filler. More than half the disses you use could be used against anyone. It's easy to do that in a first verse, but it shows that you don't have any specifics, and it hands your opponent a big advantage.

Byron: A million and one specifics. Great disses. Overdid the dick line a bit, but there were so many flow related disses to make up for it. Really fierce.

Blest:
Again, a lot of generals. Easy disses on dick jokes. I'd suggest focusing less on internal rhyme schemes and more on punches.

Byron:
Fucking excellent dick suck flip. It'd have been easy to reply with another gay line, but it does take originality to go at it from another direction. A lot of great disses and flips.

This was just Byron's all over for me. Blest had a great flow too, but I think he focused too hard on showing off his rhyme scheme skills and not attacking Byron. As a result, he was left somewhat defenseless.

[HDC Presents: Sun vs. Rez]

Dayumn, both of you hit this fucking hard. Was gonna give it to Rez until "BDSM, your mouth taped shit".

Highlights:
Rez: "Until you got a deeper voice box" "Still can't win because you're all buddy..." "Without using RhymeZone"
Sunra: "Really dude? You dropped a Lincoln on your mic?....." WFF diss, boxing flip, Stephen Hawking diss
Rez: "HelloKitty online" "... and gave no credit for the feat" "...I don't see you in my booth" "Sun has been adopted"
Sunra: Rhyme diss, "...You're not a billygoat gruff" "You choke.... lyrical make up" BDSM line.

Both of you had great flow, disses and flips. Goes to Sun by a pube hair.

HDC responds:

Sunra 5, Rezzy 5.

[heartjesus]

BEST HIPHOP TRACK TWENTYTWELVE

PiGPEN responds:

#BESTHIPHOPTRACKTWENTYTWELVE

[Gasmasq vs. Rav]

FUCK this is excellent. Not calling this.

[CLAB - Emrox vs Richard]

Emrox was GREAT, really funny, but Rich gets my vote for being a better, well, rapper. Flow, lyrics, rhythm pattern, disses etc. Emrox was funny as shit, but I'd choose Whitepants to advance.

[CLAB - AxTekk vs FatBeats]

I saved my review on this track until now and I'd like to say even though FatBeats has been chosen to advance, I still get psyched listening to this. Cringe listening to my flow here, but all in all I'm pretty proud of this.

Thanks to everyone who felt me on this, and thanks to everyone who showed me where I was weak.

FatBeats: best of luck 'gainst Gas, go get 'em for the Brits!

[I Told Ya- lil c (w. lyr)]

Keep up fam, bad abttles happen, some people don't get you, we all been there. I mean, look at Rampant's whole career on here. Just take it as a chance to improve on yourself.

Keep up man :)

[Clab - Pigpen Vs Teqneek]

Dayuuumm, close battle.

FLOW: PiG. Teq was good, and the end slo- mo was an excellent touch, But PiG just consistently switched it up, sounded so much more confident, at an in the flesh battle, I think PiG would kill like that.

DISSES: Teq, though PiG was pretty good to.
PiG: The Lil C shit at the beginning killed, right click diss.
Teq: First verse was so heavy with awesome disses. Too many to list. Second verse was OK, not as hard.

FLIPS: PiG. More flips, they were far more relevant to the original diss, and they generally hit harder.

PiG: Kony flip, Mailman flip, Morphemon flip, Teq flip.
Teq: Mailman, Umbrella in mouth, Slo-mo flip.

All in all I'd give it to PiG.